NaPo 09: "Little Homeless Clown" by Will Dockery

Here's the words for the new Will Dockery-Brian Mallard song, "She
Sleeps Tight", and the link to the instrumental track, for the session
players to have a clue as to what to play and where to play it:

http://www.archive.org/details/SheSleepsTight

She Sleeps So Tight

Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.

Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.
Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.

Won't be long,
until I see her face.
She's waiting
in an undisclosed place.
I've been conspired
banned from my muse.

This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.
This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.

In Salem town
she keeps her chin so high.
Darkened breeze
she smiles as I roll by.
Step inside
she looks for tables left.

Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.
Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.

Like a Steamboat
she plans to roll on down.
To the Gulf
out of this dirty town.
Copper mesh
kept stuffed in a jar.

Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.
Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.

We know him
eye deed by his ship.
In a trap
a kind of goosechase trip.
Whiskey fumes
and stale gunsmoke.

Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.
Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.

Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.

-Will Dockery (words)
Brian Mallard (music)

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-04-29 01:45:29 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Here's the words for the new Will Dockery-Brian Mallard song, "She
Sleeps Tight", and the link to the instrumental track, for the session
http://www.archive.org/details/SheSleepsTight
She Sleeps So Tight
Sleeps so tight

= snip =

horrid, horrid. Just...ew. I feel like I need to throw up now.

Will Dockery

2009-04-30 01:29:10 UTC

= snip =
horrid, horrid. Just...ew.

Thanks for listening and commenting, here's a rough mix demo of "She Sleeps
Tight" with vocals, since you've shown interest. Comment and critique, as
always, is welcome:

http://www.archive.org/details/SheSleepsTightvocalTake

She Sleeps So Tight

Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.

Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.
Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.

Won't be long,
until I see her face.
She's waiting
in an undisclosed place.
I've been conspired
banned from my muse.

This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.
This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.

In Salem town
she keeps her chin so high.
Darkened breeze
she smiles as I roll by.
Step inside
she looks for tables left.

Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.
Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.

Like a Steamboat
she plans to roll on down.
To the Gulf
out of this dirty town.
Copper mesh
kept stuffed in a jar.

Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.
Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.

We know him
eye deed by his ship.
In a trap
a kind of goosechase trip.
Whiskey fumes
and stale gunsmoke.

Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.
Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.

Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.

-Will Dockery (words)
Brian Mallard (music)

Will Dockery

2009-04-23 18:56:44 UTC

(Last posting before the recording session tonight, this is what I'll take
in in about an hour for a vocal track. Any last-minute c&c would be
appreciated, and thanks to George Dance for his input and corrections -WD)

Miss Crenshaw

Little Victoria
stepped on a bumblebee,
near the sawmill millhouse.

Cousin Maxwell
saw it while sitting in a tree,
on the hill
across from Uncle Grouse.

Near the house of
Bullethead & Shorty...
Always late, never home,
they's a fighting,
they'll get home the best they can.
With some luck and
a Southern wind.

Shorty's chasing Bullethead
with a frying pan
full of chicken bones.

Jerked wire
someone tried to call the cops
on the telephone.

Sort of in the backyard
of the old waterpump house.
Near the canepatch,
Miss Crenshaw's creeping like a mouse.

She said some odd words,
seen them spit right out her mouth.

Everybody's watching television,
or Miss Crenshaw's hipshake.
She's a stroller in technicolor
up and down a dirt avenue
for goodness sake.

If you need a girl
you can converse...
She's a good listener
and she ain't quite loud!
But a looker in a crowd.

On a two stooler bike,
somebody easing down the path.

Near the house of
Bullethead & Shorty...
Working late at the mill again.
Scoop the sugar with cabbage,
wash it down with cold gin.

Never sure when the morning starts
or where it ends.

I recall a bit later,
when she shook her peaches for me.
Shady silver leaf maples,
and a lonesome persimmon tree.

Full moon and hay fever
schoolhouse looking like a Sphinx.
She's a sweetie,
her hair's like a chestnut minx.

Everybody's watching television,
or Miss Crenshaw's hipshake.
She's a stroller
up and down a dirt avenue.

If you need a girl
you can converse...
She's a good listener
and she ain't quite loud!
But a looker in a crowd.

-Will Dockery

--
New Will Dockery song-poems "Crawford Road Crawl", "Rosell" & "Little
Homeless Clown":
http://www.myspace.com/willdockery

Will Dockery

2009-04-23 20:01:26 UTC

That's good,

Yes it is.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Miss Crenshaw
Little Victoria
stepped on a bumblebee,
near the sawmill millhouse.
Cousin Maxwell
saw it while sitting in a tree,
on the hill
across from Uncle Grouse.
Near the house of
Bullethead & Shorty...
Always late, never home,
they's a fighting,
they'll get home the best they can.
With some luck and
a Southern wind.
Shorty's chasing Bullethead
with a frying pan
full of chicken bones.
Jerked wire
someone tried to call the cops
on the telephone.
Sort of in the backyard
of the old waterpump house.
Near the canepatch,
Miss Crenshaw's creeping like a mouse.
She said some odd words,
seen them spit right out her mouth.
Everybody's watching television,
or Miss Crenshaw's hipshake.
She's a stroller in technicolor
up and down a dirt avenue
for goodness sake.
If you need a girl
you can converse...
She's a good listener
and she ain't quite loud!
But a looker in a crowd.
On a two stooler bike,
somebody easing down the path.
Near the house of
Bullethead & Shorty...
Working late at the mill again.
Scoop the sugar with cabbage,
wash it down with cold gin.
Never sure when the morning starts
or where it ends.
I recall a bit later,
when she shook her peaches for me.
Shady silver leaf maples,
and a lonesome persimmon tree.
Full moon and hay fever
schoolhouse looking like a Sphinx.
She's a sweetie,
her hair's like a chestnut minx.
Everybody's watching television,
or Miss Crenshaw's hipshake.
She's a stroller
up and down a dirt avenue.
If you need a girl
you can converse...
She's a good listener
and she ain't quite loud!
But a looker in a crowd.
-Will Dockery

--
New Will Dockery song-poems "Crawford Road Crawl", "Rosell" & "Little
Homeless Clown":
http://www.myspace.com/willdockery

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-04-30 05:20:51 UTC

That's good,

Yes it is.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thanks for post editing and being a twat.

Andreas Eibach

2009-04-30 13:34:26 UTC

That's good,

Yes it is.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thanks for post editing and being a twat.

You're a twat yourself because you can't seem to keep yourself from replying
to him.
If you didn't, I would not see the scribble of this individual at all
because I have him blocked since a few days.
So I have two possibilities: I'll block you TOO henceforth or you agree on
stopping these pointless disputes with him.

-Andreas

Will Dockery

2009-04-30 22:54:47 UTC

That's good,

Yes it is.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thanks for post editing and being a twat.

You're a twat yourself because you can't seem to keep yourself from replying
to him.

Yes, I just put the poems out here for comment and critique, am gladd-
ass happy when I get some feedback, thank the commenter, and move on
to the next level... if he doesn't have anything else to add after the
initial post, it seems foolish for people like Orson to keep coming
back, but to each his own, I suppose.

This guy, Rick Roots, has a similarly annoying style of endlessly
whining about my poetry... if he doesn't like it, fine, I say they
should go write (or read) something they /do/ like. As I do on a daily
basis.

--
New Will Dockery recordings, "Corning Town", "Crawford Road Crawl",
"Rosell", "Little Homeless Clown" & "She Came From Overseas":
http://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-05-06 04:27:34 UTC

That's good,

Yes it is.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thanks for post editing and being a twat.

You're a twat yourself because you can't seem to keep yourself from replying
to him.

Yes, I just put the poems out here for comment and critique,

And then throw a tantrum like a school child when people tell you that your
"poems" are barely scribbles and that they and you both suck ass.

Post by Will Dockery
am gladd-
ass happy when I get some feedback, thank the commenter, and move on
to the next level... if he doesn't have anything else to add after the
initial post, it seems foolish for people like Orson to keep coming
back, but to each his own, I suppose.

Especially you, with your NPD and all.

Post by Will Dockery
This guy, Rick Roots, has a similarly annoying style of endlessly
whining about my poetry... if he doesn't like it, fine, I say they
should go write (or read) something they /do/ like. As I do on a daily
basis.

Which is so sad and even more funny when people tell you to get off your ass
and get a job.

Post by Will Dockery
--
New Will Dockery recordings, "Cornholing Town", "Crawing On The Road
Crawl",
http://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery

Will Dockery

2009-05-06 23:00:57 UTC

That's good,

Yes it is.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thanks for post editing and being a twat.

You're a twat yourself because you can't seem to keep yourself from replying
to him.

Yes, I just put the poems out here for comment and critique, am glad-
ass happy when I get some feedback, thank the commenter, and move on
to the next level... if he doesn't have anything else to add after the
initial post, it seems foolish for people like Orson to keep coming
back, but to each his own, I suppose.

Especially you

I think I've made it clear that I'm here to stay, yes.

This guy, Rick Roots, has a similarly annoying style of endlessly
whining about my poetry... if he doesn't like it, fine, I say they
should go write (or read) something they /do/ like. As I do on a daily
basis.

Which is so sad and even more funny when people tell you to get off your ass
and get a job.

Thanks for the advice, Orson.

"Try as much as possible to be wholly alive, with all your might, and
when you laugh, laugh like hell and when you get angry, get good and
angry. Try to be alive. You will be dead soon enough." -William
Saroyan
http://www.myspace.com/willdockery

Post by Orson Wells as CitizenCain
--

New Will Dockery recordings, "Cornholing Town", "Crawing On The Road
Crawl",
http://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-05-08 05:26:38 UTC

That's good,

Yes it is.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thanks for post editing and being a twat.

You're a twat yourself because you can't seem to keep yourself from replying
to him.

Especially you

I think I've made it clear that I'm here to stay, yes.

I think everyone else has made it clear that you are viewed as a narcisstic
dimwit.

Which is so sad and even more funny when people tell you to get off your ass
and get a job.

Thanks for the advice, Orson.

What advice was that, moron? I made an observation about how you are viewed
by many others.

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-05-06 04:23:12 UTC

That's good,

Yes it is.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thanks for post editing and being a twat.

You're a twat yourself because you can't seem to keep yourself from
replying to him.

You sound like such a wonderful person.

Post by Andreas Eibach
If you didn't, I would not see the scribble of this individual at all
because I have him blocked since a few days.

Yes but much like the rainwater which oozes through the bricks, Duckery
tends to slime his way in sooner or later.

Post by Andreas Eibach
So I have two possibilities: I'll block you TOO henceforth or you agree on
stopping these pointless disputes with him.

Can't I have a third option of calling you a twat?

Rob Evans

2009-05-01 19:41:01 UTC

Our resident King Dumbass squits that he remains a

"We know

we do

you don't.

Rob

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Will Dockery

2009-05-01 21:16:59 UTC

http://tinyurl.com/whistle-lisper

"We know

we do

A quick glance in your mirror and you /should know/, Mushmouth.

--
New Will Dockery recordings, "Corning Town", "Crawford Road Crawl",
"Rosell", "Little Homeless Clown" & "She Came From Overseas":
http://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery

Will Dockery

2009-05-05 11:45:35 UTC

self obsessed

No, you seem more obsessed with "Will Dockery" than you do yourself,
Mushmouth.

She Sleeps Tight
Sleeps so tight she has a marksman's eye. Maker's mark tattoo firewater
spine. Leather shoes but nowhere to go.
Dice and coins scattered in the snow. Dice and coins scattered in the
snow.
Won't be long, until I see her face. She's waiting in an undisclosed
place. I've been conspired banned from my muse.
This won't stick poor boy's all confused. This won't stick poor boy's all
confused.
In Salem town she keeps her chin so high. Darkened breeze she smiles as I
roll by. Step inside she looks for tables left.
Wink at time nothing lasts except yourself. Wink at time nothing lasts
except yourself.
Like a Steamboat she plans to roll on down. To the Gulf out of this dirty
town. Copper mesh kept stuffed in a jar.
Sharp cold hit turning wine to water. Sharp cold hit turning wine to
water.
We know him eye deed by his ship. In a trap a kind of goosechase trip.
Whiskey fumes and stale gunsmoke.
Sunk and drowned with all her knives and jokes. Sunk and drowned with all
her knives and jokes.
Sleeps so tight she has a marksman's eye. Maker's mark tattoo firewater
spine. Leather shoes but nowhere to go.
-Will Dockery (words) Brian Mallard (music)

--
"She Sleeps Tight" by Will Dockery & Brian Mallard (vocal draft):
http://www.archive.org/details/SheSleepsTightvocalTake

Rob Evans

2009-05-05 19:14:38 UTC

Our resident King Dumbass squits...

self obsessed

No, you seem more obsessed with "Will Dockery" than you do yourself,
Mushmouth.

Don't be a silly-willy. You're self obsessed enough to cover for all of us.

Rob
--
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I reach for 45-calibre pearls

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Will Dockery

2009-05-05 19:26:53 UTC

self obsessed

No, you seem more obsessed with "Will Dockery" than you do yourself,
Mushmouth.

Don't be a silly-willy. You're self obsessed enough to cover for all of us.

The fact that you don't see how silly /your/ pathetic obsession is is
amusing, Mushmouth.

Post by Will Dockery
this lie again

--
PJR :-)

You accidentally snipped your lie, PJR, but good to see you come clean
and admit your lie:

Back on this lie again, eh, PJR?

One more time, the facts:

I wrote the poem "Karma Bombs", Michael Cook stole it word-for-word
and posted it to his website without my knowledge or permission. He
actually gave it back (this is archived), and the poem is, was and
will forever be "by Will Dockery".

Your defense of Cook's act of copyright abuse, poetry theft and (since
he left credit to me off his website posting, thus attempting to pass
the work off as his own), plagiarism is once again noted, and
interesting that you wrote this to Karla Rogers, who a year later
went
through akmost exactly the same situation possibly because Tom Bishop
saw that Michael Cook had done what he did to Karla's poem and nobody
here had a problem with it, and there you were defending and
applauding Cook's shenanigans.

So, basically, you're defending copyright abuse, plagiarism and poetry
theft every time you lie about the "Karma Bombs" situation.

--
"Try as much as possible to be wholly alive, with all your might, and
when you laugh, laugh like hell and when you get angry, get good and
angry. Try to be alive. You will be dead soon enough." -William
Saroyan
http://www.myspace.com/willdockery

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-05-06 04:14:03 UTC

self obsessed

Rob Evans

2009-05-06 13:45:02 UTC

Our resident King Dumb(lard)ass squits
"Will Dockery" <***@gmail.com> wrote in message
news:951df25e-e45a-4776-9061-> > No, you seem more obsessed with "Will
Dockery" than you do yourself,

Post by Will Dockery
Mushmouth.

Don't be a silly-willy. You're self obsessed enough to cover for all of
us.

The fact that you don't see how silly /your/ pathetic obsession is is
amusing, Mushmouth.

Anyone who has watched you gargling your "lyrics" with a straight face knows
that you lack the sense of humour to find anything amusing.

Fortunately for you, being overweight and out of condition, it takes fewer
muscles to lie (through your teeth or on your couch).

Rob
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Will Dockery

2009-05-06 20:55:05 UTC

Post by Rob Evans
Anyone who has watched you gargling your "lyrics"

Thanks for watching and having a listen, Mushmouth... anyone else
interested can click the link below for 4 or 5 of my new song-poems,
comment and critique welcome, as always.

--
"Try as much as possible to be wholly alive, with all your might, and
when you laugh, laugh like hell and when you get angry, get good and
angry. Try to be alive. You will be dead soon enough." -William
Saroyan
http://www.myspace.com/willdockery

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-05-08 05:24:37 UTC

Post by Rob Evans
Anyone who has watched you gargling your "lyrics"

Thanks for watching and having a listen, Mushmouth... anyone else
interested

There is no one interested in what you do

Rob Evans

2009-05-09 18:50:55 UTC

Our resident King Dumbass squits...

Post by Will Dockery
Thanks for watching and having a listen, Mushmouth... anyone else
interested can click the link below for 4 or 5 of my new song-poems,
comment and critique welcome, as always.

Unspeakable shit as always.

Rob
--
Rob Evans
-----------
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Will Dockery

2009-05-10 10:07:40 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Thanks for watching and having a listen, Mushmouth... anyone else
interested can click the link below for 4 or 5 of my new song-poems,
comment and critique welcome, as always.

Unspeakable shit as always.

But it does get "spoken", Mushmouth, and to be honest, you're in a
minority in your opinion of it.

We just finished the new song last night, with guest vocals by Sandy
Madaris, now on the player at the "Will Dockery & Friends" SpaceFace
page. Comments & Critique are, as always, most welcome:

http://www.myspace.com/shadowvilleallstars

She Sleeps Tight

Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.

Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.
Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.

Won't be long,
until I see her face.
She's waiting
in an undisclosed place.
I've been conspired
banned from my muse.

This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.
This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.

In Salem town
she keeps her chin so high.
Darkened breeze
she smiles as I roll by.
Step inside
she looks for tables left.

Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.
Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.

Like a Steamboat
she plans to roll on down.
To the Gulf
out of this dirty town.
Copper mesh
kept stuffed in a jar.

Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.
Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.

We know him
eye deed by his ship.
In a trap
a kind of goosechase trip.
Whiskey fumes
and stale gunsmoke.

Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.
Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.

Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.

-Will Dockery (words)
Brian Mallard (music)

George Dance

2009-05-10 13:51:35 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Thanks for watching and having a listen, Mushmouth... anyone else
interested can click the link below for 4 or 5 of my new song-poems,
comment and critique welcome, as always.

Unspeakable shit as always.

I'm listening to it now. There's a nice 60's vibe running through the
3 songs I've heard so far. I especially enjoyed hearing "She Sleeps
Tight" -- it had a pop sound that I was not expecting. Not that I
pretend to know what the main stream wants, but I think that it has
"airplay", if not "single," written all over it.

Post by Will Dockery
She Sleeps Tight
Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.
Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.
Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.
Won't be long,
until I see her face.
She's waiting
in an undisclosed place.
I've been conspired
banned from my muse.
This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.
This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.
In Salem town
she keeps her chin so high.
Darkened breeze
she smiles as I roll by.
Step inside
she looks for tables left.
Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.
Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.
Like a Steamboat
she plans to roll on down.
To the Gulf
out of this dirty town.
Copper mesh
kept stuffed in a jar.
Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.
Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.
We know him
eye deed by his ship.
In a trap
a kind of goosechase trip.
Whiskey fumes
and stale gunsmoke.
Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.
Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.
Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.
-Will Dockery (words)
Brian Mallard (music)

Will Dockery

2009-05-11 01:09:27 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
We just finished the new song last night, with guest vocals by Sandy
Madaris, now on the player at the "Will Dockery & Friends" SpaceFace
http://www.myspace.com/shadowvilleallstars

We're pretty much thinking the same thing, at least on a local level.
Sandy says a single needs a "b" side to do it right, so we wrote
"Ashes & Justice" last night, which is coming along pretty nice, also.
The fun thing would be to go the Beatles route and have a double "a"
side single. I jest in comparing us to Beatles, O'course... we sound
more like the "Paint It, Black" Stones.

Thanks for having a listen and throwing some good commentary at me,
George... gotta make this quick, I'm running late for the Sunday night
Ladonia show... on the deck, under the stars! See y'all back here,
soon.

Post by George Dance
She Sleeps Tight

Post by Will Dockery
Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.
Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.
Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.
Won't be long,
until I see her face.
She's waiting
in an undisclosed place.
I've been conspired
banned from my muse.
This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.
This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.
In Salem town
she keeps her chin so high.
Darkened breeze
she smiles as I roll by.
Step inside
she looks for tables left.
Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.
Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.
Like a Steamboat
she plans to roll on down.
To the Gulf
out of this dirty town.
Copper mesh
kept stuffed in a jar.
Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.
Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.
We know him
eye deed by his ship.
In a trap
a kind of goosechase trip.
Whiskey fumes
and stale gunsmoke.
Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.
Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.
Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.
-Will Dockery (words)
Brian Mallard (music)

--
The new song, "She Sleeps Tight", with Brian Mallard & Sandy Madaris,
on SpaceFace:
http://www.myspace.com/shadowvilleallstars

Meat Plow

2009-05-12 00:35:42 UTC

On Sun, 10 May 2009 18:09:27 -0700 (PDT), Will Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
The new song, "She Sleeps Tight", with Brian Mallard & Sandy Madaris,
http://www.myspace.com/shadowvilleallstars

Poor recording, lacking any heart and enthusiasm and very amateurish
to say the least.

Here is a band I recorded in one take then mixed down. You'll notice
the quality of the end product. Be sure to listen on a decent set of
speakers and not some junk you bought at Walmart.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7466034

These kids are all 18 -19 years old.

Will Dockery

2009-05-12 01:30:02 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
The new song, "She Sleeps Tight", with Brian Mallard & Sandy Madaris,
http://www.myspace.com/shadowvilleallstars

Poor recording, lacking any heart and enthusiasm and very amateurish
to say the least.
Here is a band I recorded in one take then mixed down. You'll notice
the quality of the end product. Be sure to listen on a decent set of
speakers and not some junk you bought at Walmart.
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7466034
These kids are all 18 -19 years old.

Thanks for posting this, Meat, I'll check it out.

--
"She Sleeps Tight", vocals by Will Dockery & Sandy Madaris, guitars by
Brian Mallard. Paintings by George Sulzbach:
http://youtu.be/9uGY157cpiU

Meat Plow

2009-05-12 01:59:37 UTC

On Mon, 11 May 2009 18:30:02 -0700 (PDT), Will Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
The new song, "She Sleeps Tight", with Brian Mallard & Sandy Madaris,
http://www.myspace.com/shadowvilleallstars

Poor recording, lacking any heart and enthusiasm and very amateurish
to say the least.
Here is a band I recorded in one take then mixed down. You'll notice
the quality of the end product. Be sure to listen on a decent set of
speakers and not some junk you bought at Walmart.
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7466034
These kids are all 18 -19 years old.

Thanks for posting this, Meat, I'll check it out.

Here is a sample vid of my studio control room. I made it for the
alt.guitar fuckheads. 4 minutes or so long.

http://s273.photobucket.com/albums/jj220/meatplow1/Mackie/?action=view&current=CIMG0556.flv

The sound isn't great because the vid was taken with a still picture
camera that also takes videos (Casio Exilim EX-Z1050) but it will do
because the reason of the vid wasn't the sound.

You see I've had this problem with people like yourself dissin me
because I haven't made a fucking video and posted it. I don't have the
time to sit the fuck around and compose music but I sure can record
and produce an album.

Will Dockery

2009-05-12 02:51:18 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
The new song, "She Sleeps Tight", with Brian Mallard & Sandy Madaris,
http://www.myspace.com/shadowvilleallstars

Poor recording, lacking any heart and enthusiasm and very amateurish
to say the least.
Here is a band I recorded in one take then mixed down. You'll notice
the quality of the end product. Be sure to listen on a decent set of
speakers and not some junk you bought at Walmart.
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7466034
These kids are all 18 -19 years old.

Thanks for posting this, Meat, I'll check it out.

Here is a sample vid of my studio control room. I made it for the
alt.guitar fuckheads. 4 minutes or so long.
http://s273.photobucket.com/albums/jj220/meatplow1/Mackie/?action=vie...

Hey, I'll go there now, that sounds interesting.

Post by Meat Plow
The sound isn't great because the vid was taken with a still picture
camera that also takes videos (Casio Exilim EX-Z1050) but it will do
because the reason of the vid wasn't the sound.
You see I've had this problem with people like yourself dissin me

No, in this case I'm not dissin you... you gave me an honest opinion
and I have come to feel you do know a thing or two about rock-and-
roll.

Post by Meat Plow
because I haven't made a fucking video and posted it. I don't have the
time to sit the fuck around and compose music but I sure can record
and produce an album.

A good producer is of course an artist in his own right.

--
"She Sleeps Tight", vocals by Will Dockery & Sandy Madaris, guitars by
Brian Mallard. Paintings by George Sulzbach:
http://youtu.be/9uGY157cpiU

George Dance

2009-05-13 13:21:28 UTC

We're pretty much thinking the same thing, at least on a local level.
"Ashes & Justice" last night, which is coming along pretty nice, also.
The fun thing would be to go the Beatles route and have a double "a"
side single. I jest in comparing us to Beatles, O'course... we sound
more like the "Paint It, Black" Stones.

Well, I'm just a listener, when it comes to music, but the first song
that came to my head, simply because of Mallard's guitar sound (not
the tune, just the sound, if you know what I mean) was the Beatles'
"And your Bird Can Sing." Of course that prejudices me: I still
remember hearing that as a lad and thinking it was the best guitar I'd
ever heard. (Of course, I'd never even heard of Hendrix or Clapton
back then.)

I just had an idle thought; if you and Mallard are producing the
track, you should probably give yourself a name. "The Duck Bros."
would be a good one, being (in your case) an in-yr-face to a few
people.

Post by Will Dockery
Thanks for having a listen and throwing some good commentary at me,
George... gotta make this quick, I'm running late for the Sunday night
Ladonia show... on the deck, under the stars! See y'all back here,
soon.

Post by George Dance
She Sleeps Tight

--
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Will Dockery

2009-05-14 20:49:10 UTC

I'll have to pass that on to Mallard, and thanks for that praise of
the highest order.

Post by George Dance
I just had an idle thought; if you and Mallard are producing the
track, you should probably give yourself a name. "The Duck Bros."
would be a good one, being (in your case) an in-yr-face to a few
people.

Exactly... and it turns out that a couple of the 140 known variations
of the name "Dockery" are exactly what these Usenet pranksters use to
try and insult me... but as I've said before, I'm fond of ducks, as
well as most any of God's creatures... although I more respect the
rattlesnakes and cottonmouths rather than hold them in fond regard.

As I wrote elsewhere:

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=2585524&l=5aaeda8eae&id=620409362

"...Stretching pretty close to the Celtic days is mine, ÓDochartaigh,
which has resulted in something like 140 different spellings they've
counted so far, with two meanings, which I have no comment on:

Meaning 1: 'The Destroyer', or 'Obstructive', understood to have been
earned in battle.
Meaning 2: 'People of the Oaks'

http://www.odochartaigh.org/genealogy/name.html

Origins:
Cennfaeladh (pronounced: cenn falla) - Prince of Tyrconnell about 800
AD
Fiamhain - early 800's
Maongal - son of Fiamhain
Donal - son of Maongal, earned the title 'Dochartaig'
Maongall - son of Dochartaig
Donoch - grandson of Dochartaig, therefore: ÓDochartaig
ÓDocartaig - 890 to 1550
ÓDochartaigh - later Irish
ÓDougherty, ÓDogherty - use by Cahir Rua about 1600
ÓDocherty, Docherty - Scoticized
Introduced into foreign lands as:

Daugherty - went to North America before 1800
Dougherty -majority landed in the USA after 1800
Daugheetee - out of West Virginia mountains
Darity - into the southern seaboard, USA
Dority - same name further West, USA
Daughtry - used in deep South and West, USA
Daughtrey - derivation of the previous, especially popular in Texas
Doherty - modern Anglicization, popular since 1800, found in North-
central USA [and the East & West coast of Canada]
[Dogherty - found in Spain]
Dorrity - found in Derry, Cork and a few areas of the USA

[...]

DU... Duarte
Ducker
Duckry?
USA: NC
abt. 1860 [7] . . . .

Post by George Dance
Thanks for having a listen and throwing some good commentary at me,

Post by Will Dockery
George... gotta make this quick, I'm running late for the Sunday night
Ladonia show... on the deck, under the stars! See y'all back here,
soon.

Post by George Dance
She Sleeps Tight

Post by Will Dockery
Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater smile.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.
Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.
Dice and coins
scattered in the snow.
Won't be long,
until I see her face.
She's waiting
in an undisclosed place.
I've been conspired
banned from my muse.
This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.
This won't stick
poor boy's all confused.
In Salem town
she keeps her chin so high.
Darkened breeze
she smiles as I roll by.
Step inside
she looks for tables left.
Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.
Wink at time
nothing lasts except yourself.
Like a Steamboat
she plans to roll on down.
To the Gulf
out of this dirty town.
Copper mesh
kept stuffed in a jar.
Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.
Sharp cold hit
turning wine to water.
We know him
eye deed by his ship.
In a trap
a kind of goosechase trip.
Whiskey fumes
and stale gunsmoke.
Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.
Sunk and drowned
with all her knives and jokes.
Sleeps so tight
she has a marksman's eye.
Maker's mark
tattoo firewater spine.
Leather shoes
but nowhere to go.
-Will Dockery (words)
Brian Mallard (music)

--
"She Sleeps Tight", vocals by Will Dockery & Sandy Madaris, guitars by
Brian Mallard. Paintings by George Sulzbach:
http://youtu.be/9uGY157cpiU

Post by Will Dockery
--
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Will Dockery

2009-05-11 23:36:14 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Thanks for watching and having a listen, Mushmouth... anyone else
interested can click the link below for 4 or 5 of my new song-poems,
comment and critique welcome, as always.

Unspeakable shit as always.

Not sure what a "meh" is, probably something like "blah"?

Thanks for coming over and having a look/listen, though...

--
"She Sleeps Tight" (the video), vocals by Will Dockery & Sandy
Madaris, guitars by Brian Mallard. Paintings by George Sulzbach

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-05-14 02:45:57 UTC

"Will Dockery" <***@gmail.com> wrote in message news:250c8994-1a19-4b4b-90a8-***@x6g2000vbg.googlegroups.com...

Thanks

You're not welcome. Eat shit, you psychopathic douchebag.

Rob Evans

2009-05-10 20:04:58 UTC

Our resident King Dumbass squits...

Post by Will Dockery
Thanks for watching and having a listen, Mushmouth... anyone else
interested can click the link below for 4 or 5 of my new song-poems,
comment and critique welcome, as always.

Unspeakable shit as always.

But it does get "spoken", Mushmouth, and to be honest, you're in a
minority in your opinion of it.

Nope, it gets gargled and since you probably count as badly as you read and
write we can assume that minority is Duckrish for majority.

Rob
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Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-05-13 02:43:15 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Thanks for watching and having a listen, Mushmouth... anyone else
interested can click the link below for 4 or 5 of my new song-poems,
comment and critique welcome, as always.

Unspeakable shit as always.

But it does get "spoken", Mushmouth,

If you perform it, it gets spoken, twit.

Post by Will Dockery
and to be honest, you're in a
minority in your opinion of it.

Show me at least five people who don't think your shit sucks.

Post by Will Dockery
We just finished the new song last night, with guest vocals by Sandy
Madaris, now on the player at the "Will Dockery & Friends" SpaceFace

What sort of gay photos do you have of Sandy to get him to do that shit?

Post by Will Dockery
http://www.myspace.com/shadowvilleallstars
She Sleeps Tight

*puke*

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-04-30 05:20:12 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
(Last posting before the recording session tonight, this is what I'll take
in in about an hour for a vocal track. Any last-minute c&c would be
appreciated, and thanks to George Dance for his input and corrections -WD)

c&c? You mean input? Sure. This sucks balls and you're a fool for even
writing it in the first place. What the HELL are you smoking, Will? Really.

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw
Little Victoria
stepped on [GAG]

Will Dockery

2009-05-07 11:34:12 UTC

Miss Alice Crenshaw

Little Victoria
stepped on a bumblebee,
near the sawmill millhouse.

Cousin Maxwell
saw it while sitting in a tree,
on the hill
across from Uncle Grouse.

Near the house of
Bullethead & Shorty...
Always late, never home,
they's a fighting,
they'll get home the best they can.
With some luck and
a Southern wind.

Shorty's chasing Bullethead
with a frying pan
full of chicken bones.

Jerked wire
someone tried to call the cops
on the telephone.

Sort of in the backyard
of the old waterpump house.
Near the canepatch,
Miss Crenshaw's creeping like a mouse.

She said some odd words,
seen them spit right out her mouth.

Everybody's watching television,
or Miss Crenshaw's hipshake.
She's a stroller in technicolor
up and down a dirt avenue
for goodness sake.

If you need a girl
you can converse...
She's a good listener
and she ain't quite loud!
But a looker in a crowd.

On a two stooler bike,
somebody easing down the path.

Near the house of
Bullethead & Shorty...
Working late at the mill again.
Scoop the sugar with cabbage,
wash it down with cold gin.

Never sure when the morning starts
or where it ends.

I recall a bit later,
when she shook her peaches for me.
Shady silver leaf maples,
and a lonesome persimmon tree.

Full moon and hay fever
schoolhouse looking like a Sphinx.
She's a sweetie,
her hair's like a chestnut minx.

Everybody's watching television,
or Miss Crenshaw's hipshake.
She's a stroller
up and down a dirt avenue.

If you need a girl
you can converse...
She's a good listener
and she ain't quite loud!
But a looker in a crowd.

-Will Dockery

--
New Will Dockery song-poems "Crawford Road Crawl", "Rosell" & "Little
Homeless Clown":
http://www.myspace.com/willdockery

Orson Wells as CitizenCain

2009-05-08 05:27:27 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Alice Crenshaw
Little Victoria
stepped on a bumblebee,
near the sawmill millhouse.

Little Victoria would hopefully sue the hell out of you for using Little
Victoria's name. Little Victoria deserves more than some pedophile nitwit
pizza boy using Little Victoria as a plea for attention.

Will Dockery

2011-03-22 10:30:08 UTC

Miss Crenshaw

Little Victoria
stepped on a bumblebee,
near the sawmill millhouse.

Cousin Maxwell
saw it while sitting in a tree,
on the hill
across from Uncle Grouse.

Near the house of
Bullethead & Shorty...
Always late, never home,
they's a fighting,
they'll get home the best they can.
With some luck and
a Southern wind.

Shorty's chasing Bullethead
with a frying pan
full of chicken bones.

Jerked wire
someone tried to call the cops
on the telephone.

Sort of in the backyard
of the old waterpump house.
Near the canepatch,
Miss Crenshaw's creeping like a mouse.

She said some odd words,
seen them spit right out her mouth.

Everybody's watching television,
or Miss Crenshaw's hipshake.
She's a stroller in technicolor
up and down a dirt avenue
for goodness sake.

If you need a girl
you can converse...
She's a good listener
and she ain't quite loud!
But a looker in a crowd.

On a two stooler bike,
somebody easing down the path.

Near the house of
Bullethead & Shorty...
Working late at the mill again.
Scoop the sugar with cabbage,
wash it down with cold gin.

Never sure when the morning starts
or where it ends.

I recall a bit later,
when she shook her peaches for me.
Shady silver leaf maples,
and a lonesome persimmon tree.

Full moon and hay fever
schoolhouse looking like a Sphinx.
She's a sweetie,
her hair's like a chestnut minx.

Everybody's watching television,
or Miss Crenshaw's hipshake.
She's a stroller
up and down a dirt avenue.

If you need a girl
you can converse...
She's a good listener
and she ain't quite loud!
But a looker in a crowd.

-Will Dockery

--
Ashes to Justice / Will Dockery & The Shadowville All-Stars:

Hieronymous Corey

2011-03-22 23:11:02 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

Will Dockery

2011-03-23 08:33:21 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

She seemed to be doing fine the last time I spoke with her.

--
Music, poetry & video of Will Dockery & Friends:
http://www.youtube.com/user/WDockery

Hieronymous Corey

2011-03-23 08:45:37 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

She seemed to be doing fine the last time I spoke with her.

Sorry, that's not what I meant. You used to have Alice in the title;
now you don't. I was wondering why the change. I think 'Alice' alone
makes a good title for that piece.

Will Dockery

2011-03-23 08:56:32 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

She seemed to be doing fine the last time I spoke with her.

Sorry, that's not what I meant. You used to have Alice in the title;
now you don't. I was wondering why the change. I think 'Alice' alone
makes a good title for that piece.

I think you're right, "Alice" does make a pretty good title.

--
Poetry, music & video of Will Dockery & Friends;
http://www.youtube.com/user/WDockery

Hieronymous Corey

2011-03-23 09:03:48 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

She seemed to be doing fine the last time I spoke with her.

Sorry, that's not what I meant. You used to have Alice in the title;
now you don't. I was wondering why the change. I think 'Alice' alone
makes a good title for that piece.

I think you're right, "Alice" does make a pretty good title.

It's a personal thing, but Crenshaw makes me think of a melon. Miss
personifies it, but doesn't really kick the piece off properly for
me. I'm still working on the melon midway through your poem. Alice
has all sorts of other associations for me; people I know, songs I
remember. It gets my mind working, searching for relevant connections
between the title and the text.

Will Dockery

2011-03-23 09:09:26 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

She seemed to be doing fine the last time I spoke with her.

Sorry, that's not what I meant. You used to have Alice in the title;
now you don't. I was wondering why the change. I think 'Alice' alone
makes a good title for that piece.

I think you're right, "Alice" does make a pretty good title.

"Crenshaw" is a bit difficult to pronounce, or awkward, I've found in
reading it aloud.

--
Poetry, music & video of Will Dockery & Friends;
http://www.youtube.com/user/WDockery

Hieronymous Corey

2011-03-23 09:33:30 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

She seemed to be doing fine the last time I spoke with her.

Sorry, that's not what I meant. You used to have Alice in the title;
now you don't. I was wondering why the change. I think 'Alice' alone
makes a good title for that piece.

I think you're right, "Alice" does make a pretty good title.

"Crenshaw" is a bit difficult to pronounce, or awkward, I've found in
reading it aloud.

It's a good name, but non-starter for the piece.

Will Dockery

2011-03-23 09:43:18 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

She seemed to be doing fine the last time I spoke with her.

Sorry, that's not what I meant. You used to have Alice in the title;
now you don't. I was wondering why the change. I think 'Alice' alone
makes a good title for that piece.

I think you're right, "Alice" does make a pretty good title.

"Crenshaw" is a bit difficult to pronounce, or awkward, I've found in
reading it aloud.

It's a good name, but non-starter for the piece.

I think I'll retool this one a bit... thanks for the feedback, really.

--
Music, poetry & video of Will Dockery & Friends:
http://www.youtube.com/user/WDockery

Hieronymous Corey

2011-03-23 10:06:42 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

She seemed to be doing fine the last time I spoke with her.

Sorry, that's not what I meant. You used to have Alice in the title;
now you don't. I was wondering why the change. I think 'Alice' alone
makes a good title for that piece.

I think you're right, "Alice" does make a pretty good title.

"Crenshaw" is a bit difficult to pronounce, or awkward, I've found in
reading it aloud.

It's a good name, but non-starter for the piece.

I think I'll retool this one a bit... thanks for the feedback, really.
--
Music, poetry & video of Will Dockery & Friends:http://www.youtube.com/user/WDockery- Hide quoted text -
- Show quoted text -

You're welcome.

Will Dockery

2011-04-13 21:26:34 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Miss Crenshaw

What's the matter with Alice?

She seemed to be doing fine the last time I spoke with her.

Sorry, that's not what I meant. You used to have Alice in the title;
now you don't. I was wondering why the change. I think 'Alice' alone
makes a good title for that piece.

I think you're right, "Alice" does make a pretty good title.

"Crenshaw" is a bit difficult to pronounce, or awkward, I've found in
reading it aloud.

It's a good name, but non-starter for the piece.

I think I'll retool this one a bit... thanks for the feedback, really.
--

http://www.youtube.com/user/WDockery

Post by Will Dockery
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You're welcome.

The feedback is becoming even more valuable, as this is one I'm
tossing back into the arena with Brian Mallard & new Shadowville All-
Star guitarist Rusty Wood (you met both at Doo-Nanny, of course), for
a snappy sound. Rusty's got a lighter more 1980s pop sound that I
think will work well with this, which is looking very much like
"Alice" now.

--
Music & poetry of Will Dockery & Friends:
http://www.myspace.com/willdockery/music/playlists/my-playlist-33106

Will Dockery

2012-11-14 03:19:41 UTC